Hi there
Ive looked at this site and its pretty good my compliments to its creator for doing a good job

so now ive seen yours and joined please return the compliment by coming to:

http://galaxyofgardening.wetpaint.com/

best wishes
kev

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yeah guys here is my story i whould love to hear what you think about it
Today is the start of the national battle league soccer tournament me and my team have been training for this day for a very long time. My team consists of 13 members six start out on the field. There is me the captain my name is Alucard Siamoon I am the center forward .before I get to far ahead of myself I should let you know that in this league that it is legal to kill the opponent in fact you get one point for killing them and you win if you take out the entire team. However if you make it in the goal you get two points. Each person gets an energy weapon of their choice and you power it up by channeling your energy into it and based on your energy color determines your weapon’s color. Now my weapon is an axe and my energy color is dark green. My goalie’s name is Jack Somneer he has a shield and the shield is forms from a small circle and the energy expands out into a full sized shield his is crimson red and there is also his cousin Johnny Samneer who is our left forward with his dark blue energy staff with spikes. Our two defenders are Resmic and Scythe the each have an energy mace which comes out of a handle and their colors are dark red. And then there is our middle forward Lea Siamoon who is my twin sister her weapon is an energy katana and her energy color is black. She is the best own of us out there and she is one of the main reasons why we win all the time she is a complete badass no one can stop her when she gets going. One time I made the mistake of making fun of her before she had her morning coffee then all I felt was her foot hit me in the chin and then her foot came crashing down on face knocking me out instantly

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i like the style you wrote it in. its really good. but seriously i dont see you getting into a fight so serious that someone comes and runs you over haha, but i guess thats the purpose of calling it a totally bogus random story... anyways really good haha

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IVE RECIEVED MANY COMPLAINTS ON MY LATEST STORIES SO I HAVE STARTED WORK ON ANOTHER ONE, HOPEFULLY THE CHANGES IVE MADE WILL END ALL YOUR PROBLEMS. HA!

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I finally finished and posted A Trip Not Soon Forgotten

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Ooh how i love a good battle story. Especially yours. Its good to know that your open enough to right about a subject as gruesome as war can be. Other than some grammaticaly errors which no one cares about here at sst, its awesome. **** stars

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That's right, I have big boobs. LOL, love the story. Cept, I don't think I'd have forgotten my muse in the locker, though... Eh... Oh well.. who cares, it's Cody.

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Huh, wonder what the prize is for this one???? Bologna

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i gave up on catcher in the rye... it just wasn't for me. started on the notebook... i really like it. talk to everyone later ....and let's try to get some more active people on this site guys and gals..

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who here has a phenominal idea for a love scene/story.
im on my fiftthhhh novel for my book and am totally and utterly stuck.
i dont even know if this goes here but oh well.
please?
i totally love the idea of this site.

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