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If Small Towns Were Found
By Lyndsey Reutter
Prologue
This is the story of a small town with lots of unexpected changes. Rumors spread constantly by eavesdropping neighbors and truths keep secret by closest friends. The small town of Noreen is no different from any other small rural area, with its corrupt rich and estranged poor. I’m the eyes and I shall show you the story of this small town in which I look down upon now.
Chapter 1
Mallory lay deep in thought on the black futon that served as John’s bed. She didn't know what she pondered about, she was in more of a mental daze one might say. Someone who she thought had to be John creped up beside her and lay down. Mallory didn't move, not a muscle. Not an inch. It must be john. She felt a hand on her back and then lips against her's. Something was wrong. She and John were just friends. He wouldn't kiss her. As this thought passed through her mind, the lips moved to the neck, and the hand on her back moved towards the front side of her shirt. it was so if. What was going on.
Wait she knew this smell. The Derek Jetter Cologne Patrick wore. She opened her eyes all the sudden and noticed it wasn't John she was kissing but his brother Patrick.
"You Horn dog" She yelled as she pushed Patrick to the floor. She finger brushed her black hair down smooth and pulled down her shirt.
"Come on Mal, you weren't this stubborn the last time" Patrick said as he sat down beside her on the futon. "Remember in the back of my car out on the peak. You said you had fun. Why not have a little more."
"Patrick if you've forgotten we were dating then and the chances of that happening again are slim to none" Mallory Lied. She still loved Patrick like she did the three years they dated and she wanted him so bad but nothing was going to bring her into anything like that now. She touched the promise ring he had given her and wouldn’t take back
"Are You Sure you didn't want us to happen again" Patrick Said. He saw her touch the ring. "or are you like in love with my Fag-Ass Brother"
Mallory slapped him as John reached the top of the Stairs that lead to their Bedroom. A million thoughts ran through his head as he tried to contemplate what had happened.
"Pat, what’d you do?" John Questioned in a demanding voice.
Mallory Felt Bad for a second but then thought of last year when Patrick cheated of her with that sleeze Susan Morton. He deserved what ever john did to him. Wait this is john not Heath Kellar or Adam Darcy. This was John Gates. John wasn't going to stand a chance against Patrick.
"I was kissing my Girl what did it look like, you Queer." Patrick said as he stood up and walked over to john.
"Your Girl?” Mallory yelled. "Last Time I checked you cheated on me"
"No, Baby, No." Patrick tried to console her. He still had feelings for her and couldn't help but melt into her blue eyes.
“Yeah I think you did. So that means I can do this" She says as she walks over to John and pushes him on the futon. She falls onto of him and begins to push her lips against his.
"Mallory Get up" Patrick demanded "Now!" He couldn't take this humiliation. He pushed Mallory away from john. Patrick pulled john up by the shirt neck and stared him in the eyes.
"If you touch Mallory Grey again I will personally kill you" Patrick said. He punched john in the Face and threw him on the floor.
"Patrick you jack ass" Mallory Screamed. "I’m not your girl and I would prefer John over a jerk like you any day”
Mallory stormed out of the room with Patrick in toe as john sat on the futon wondering what had just happened. Mallory Grey, who had been the prettiest girl in town before her cousin came, kissed him and he felt nothing. Nothing at all. All he felt was a throbbing on his cheek bone from where his brother had punched him.
Chapter 2
Victoria opened the door of the quiet house. The place was a bit untidy bit a week with Tori would change that
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| goradio | whooo | 1 | Oct 26 2007, 9:11 PM EDT by LLReootter913 | |
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| georgia_jewl92 | Chapter 1 | 0 | Oct 22 2007, 5:53 PM EDT by georgia_jewl92 | |
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the story leaves me wanting to know more! i understand where all of the characters are emocationally, you did a good job describing the characters through their actions. Im waiting for you post more!
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| Marshmellow01 | If small towns... | 1 | Oct 16 2007, 10:12 PM EDT by LLReootter913 | |
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I really like how its going. Both internal and external conflicts were very descriptive.
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